Verse
You fly
So high.
I just can't help but think of you.
In this world
Where we stand,
The sky won't limit what we do
Inter-
Changing
Emotions wandering your head
The place
You live,
You're awesome just the way you give
Pre-Chorus
~Me a thrill~
You're flying higher than you can handle.
~you're the wind~
Ride off, ride off, ride off, ride off of you.
Chorus
Ride off wind.
Soarin higher,
Farther,
Faster, goin with you
Make your move.
And sing louder,
Faster,
Find what you're looking for.
Don't you cry.
Do what you can to get by---------
Ride off the wind
Verse
Prepared,
And go out.
I'll go just anywhere with you.
Head out,
And get back
You said, "Baby, I love you too."
Change the
Channel,
Oh god, you know I hate this show.
You start
Thinking
Wondering how your life will be,
Pre-Chorus
~When you are~
Saying, "Yes, I do" on top of the altar.
~See it now~
Oh god, change it, change it now!!!!
Chorus
" "
Bridge
Listen, listen well.
I'm not the guy you met after the show
I, I can tell
That you are havin some difficulty
Sit, with me now
I'll write the best love song you've ever heard,
So just, just please,
Like me-------
Chorus
" " (Repeats twice)
Thursday, May 8, 2008
Ride Off Wind
Posted by Ryan at 11:59 AM
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This "Broken" rhyme scheme works well for your song, creating a dynamic song scheme. If anything, I'd say the vocabulary is lacking, but seeing as how this is a song as opposed to a poem, this works fine. Good job on the song, look forward to seeing how it turns out when we finish the parts.
The Story:
My song is a story of two lovers close enough to be living together, but not yet married. It starts off as the guy in the relationship thinking about how wonderful of a person this girl is. He thinks everything is going well with his relationship, but what he doesn't know is that she thinks about him everyday, and interchanging emotions are wandering around her thoughts. He doesn't know how much she's going through, but whenever they're together, they feel at ease.
The chorus tells of the guy talking to the girl, telling her that everything is good and that he'll be there for her. "Ride off wind" he's saying that he's the wind and that she can use him any way that she needs to because of how much he cares about her.
Starting off the second verse, they're going out on a date. The guy is still head over heels in love with this girl, saying that he'll go anywhere with her. When they get back, everything is still great, and she says to him that she loves him. It begins to take a turn for the worst, when the guy begins to get a little irritated with something so small that the girl does, so she starts to wonder about what she's doing with him. She also starts to think about how her life would be if she ended up marrying him. Thinking about the worst case scenario, she begins to worry about her future.
The chorus repeats again as a reminder that the guy is still completely in love with her. He is oblivious to her now current melancholy and has no intention of asking her about it.
During the bridge the guy figures out about his girlfriend's true feelings and intentions, so he finally goes to talk to her. As he begins to talk to her, he realizes that he hasn't been listening to her or paying attention to what she was feeling. He starts telling her that he's changed since they first met, some parts of him for the better and some parts for the worst, but he still loves her with all his heart. He admits that he'll do anything for her, and he decides to write her a love song. He asks her to just like him; to like him the way she did when they first met. This song is the product of his love for her.
The final chorus is the happy ending. Everything worked out well and they were happy together again. He says to her that he'll be there to comfort her, he'll be there to lift her up and support her, and most importantly, he tells her that he'll always love her.
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